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Sanosuke Hitori
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PostSubject: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:06 pm

I was wondering how to get the position of Editor here? I only ask because I've written a lot of successful stories on FanFiction and I'd like to share some of my talent with the site. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:58 pm

You can contact either Ravage_Gokan or AngryBoy and send them examples of your work.
They would decide whether you are suitable for the position.
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:26 pm

UserName: Your desired Username as an editor
Article Series: The name of your article
Article type: Text, Sprited, Drawn
Brief Description: Just a small summary of what this will be about
Best Example of work: Give me the best work you have done, this will be what I hold my standards up to.
Rate of Work: Choose from the following: Daily, Bi-Daily, Tri-daily, Weekly, Bi-Weekly, Tri-Weekly, Monthly
Anything Else: Anything else you think I should know


Fill out the form.
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Sanosuke Hitori
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:03 pm

UserName: Sano

Article Series: The Qin Dynasty

Article type: Text

Brief Description: This will be a fairly long story about a non-canon Uub, whom meets another non-canon character I have named "Emperor Chaozu." I don't want to reveal the story, but this Emperor Chaozu discovers the powers of Uub through the destruction of one of his generals, and recruits Uub as the replacement. They journey the world with the intentions of world domination - while Uub tries to deal with his powerful inner demons.

Best Example of work: Prologue

Uub crouched low to the ground, peering through a thin
hole in the thorny bush in front of him. Several sharp twigs were
pressing into his creamy brown skin, nicking and grazing his skin every
time he shifted or moved. While his tan coloured Gi was snagged on an
especially large thorn, and his sandal-worn feet were overlayed with
tens of scratches. His dark mohawk was limp and drooped depressingly to
the side, as if it had never been given a proper wash. Uub
dug into the bush a little more, ignoring the twinging pain in his
hands, until the hole opened wide enough to properly see through. He
gave an audible gasped and practically shoved his head through the gap.

He
glimpsed a wise entrance surrounded by four guards, covered from head
to foot in thick, steel armour. Ornate sheathes hung by their sides,
decorated hilts protruding from the top. Their heads were enfolded by
garnished helmets with a gold plates. He glared at them, saw them
mingle and talk and laugh, not even caring that they had, days before,
destroyed his village, Killed his family and friends, and torch the
beautiful huts and farms. Anger began to stir and boil in his heart, a
silky white aura slowly enveloped his body, a rasping noise like wind
through a hollow rock began to rise. Uub’s breathing
accelerated as did his heart, the pounding in his chest rising to new
heights. Then, as suddenly as it had stopped, the power melted away.
The voice in his head began to murmur...’revenge...’ It
whispered, stoking the fire in him but pushing down the power, allowing
him to think and not blindly flounder towards the probably stronger
guards.

’Get them back, the man who killed them all...’ It finished, melting away before he could ask what to do. Uub
made a quick decision, he burst from the bushes and stalked towards the
guards, twigs and sticks ripping from their original locations and
pushing into his skin, but he didn’t care. He tried to make himself
bigger, bulking up his body by breathing deeply. Uub
came to a stop in front of them, suddenly not as socky when he saw them
up close. The soldiers towered above him, sneering down at his small
form and clasping their hands to their swords.

“What’s up, Kid?”
The Biggest one said, probably their leader. “Looking for your mommy?”
Rage boiled his blood, a red heat spread through his face and he knew
he was blushing. “Actually,” Uub began, “I’m here to see your General, I want to speak with him, now!”.

The Guards suddenly became grim, feeling a resonating power from Uub’s
thin body, they retreated to the wooden gate and pulled out their
swords. The blades whipped out and looked breath-takingly sharp.

“Kuro,” The leader murmured with a fearful tone to the short one, “Get the Emperor, now!”

Rate of Work: Well, I'm caught between weekly and bi-weekly because sometimes I'm strapped for time, but it would probably be weekly.

Anything Else: I've written many stories before, but I've been working on the storyline of The Qin Dynasty for a long time, and this is my result, I promise it will be a roller coaster of excitement. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:12 pm

Alright man, looks good, in my read through I found three errors however.

1)He
gave an audible gasped and practically shoved his head through the gap.


Should have said Audible Gasp

2)Then, as suddenly as it had stopped, the power melted away.

I'm assuming you meant started

3)Uub
came to a stop in front of them, suddenly not as socky when he saw them
up close.


I'm pretty sure they were not socky, but rather Stocky.


Pretty good though, nice vocabulary use; and of adequate length. The errors arn't that big of a deal, but its still nice to see a perfect issue.

Would Wednesday or Friday Updates work for you?
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:15 pm

Friday would be perfect, and about the errors, I just typed the prologue quickly a few nights ago and didn't use Word Very Happy. Thanks for having me.
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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:32 pm

No problem. You are now an "inturn" of sorts. You will release another issue within the next week before you're (Now I feel like an ass because I always yell at people for using the wrong your) your updates will go onto the main site.

(If AB hasn't made you an editor on the forum, just pm me the update).


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PostSubject: Re: Editor   Editor Clock10Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:33 pm

Aiight, no problem, thanks. Very Happy
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