The storyline is about America and DBZ. It has DBZ races in it, but the villians are completly different from DBZ Villians.

America is overrun by Cultists of Death(Better name of course in story.) They have the ability to kill
anything within their grasp, and curse anyone at will. Cultist start bleeding, after they curse or kill someone. They have to inflict pyshical harm to themselve, before the other person will be killed.
America is took over, and ran by cultists now, converting most people to cultists.
( The killing spell is ineffective against high powerlevels, they also have the power to summon shadow beasts that send people into a realm of their own nightmares, the person must either fight their way out of this realm, or die.)


Saiyans and Nameks and a few expectionally strong humans have made a small base in the forest.
Led by Nat. Freeman a intelligent human being, they plan to fight .ack against the cultist scum.
(all the info that can be given out now.)

Cultists?

Saiyans?
Nameks?
Humans?

Tell me what you are when you submit sheet with general info
Name:
Race:
Age:
General History:
Personality:

Hahaha, a comic about America? Oh lord.

Don't comic if nothing nice to say. Not making it about AMERICA. Making it about the storyline, Just America is the place they conquered.

SociallyAwkardPenguin wrote:

Don't comic if nothing nice to say.

It's comment. Also, people critique, and usually what they have to say isn't that nice.

I look foreword to this comic, Nat. Freeman sounds like he could be Gordon Freeman from Half Life.

IT is, but if you read my sprite thread, you'll understand.
Its a common american last name, my friend has that last name.

I just want to know something before I post: are you talking about United State of America (country) or America (continent)?

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Name:Ryo
Race:saiyan (but transforms randomly into saiyan)
Age : 15


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